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Old 07-15-2001, 06:38 PM   #3
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Critique

After looking at your recent portrait several times and since you asked for comment, I thought I would offer my concern for the strong reflected light on the subject's right cheek which seems a little too light and doesn't describe a form consistant with the shapes on the other side. The shadow from the glass frames could be underplayed also. It draws more attention then it should. (I don't like to do glasses or teeth)

Good job.

I hope this is helpful.
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