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Old 11-02-2004, 07:26 PM   #3
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Hi Holly,

I'm finding the light area beside her leg on our left to be very distracting. It first attracts attention by being the largest bright area of the painting. It is very close to the color of her legs, so I spend extra time reading the position of her legs. The back of the knee on her standing leg reads as being too low, and that continues to draw my attention. In relation to that, her face seems buried in the dark and almost pushes attention away.
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