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Old 07-02-2003, 09:14 AM   #4
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In addition to what Chuck said, I would soften the woman's hair so it's not seen as individual strands so much. The extra large mouth on the woman gives her a very extreme expression. Her smile in the photo is gentler. I would also soften the edges and contrast in the background.

Very nice color overall and the man's expression is warm and tender.
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