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Old 02-26-2005, 10:17 PM   #2
Julie Deane Julie Deane is offline
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Nice Job!

Hi Marcus -

I really like this composition! It gives such an uplifting feeling, full of emotion. The colors add to the festive air and complement it well. Wonderful!

The only thing I am not sure I care for is the figure on the left. I think its drawing is not fully believable. Do you have an original photo reference you can post for comparison?

On second thought, try putting your fingers over the left-hand figure to block it out. Would this composition work better without it?
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