Wedding present

[Claudemir Bonfim]

Originally Posted by Julie Deane

Hi Claudemir -

Here it is....boy, there's nothing like seeing it on the web to notice the things that should have been fixed!

Let me know what you see - I am seeing some, but would love to have confirmation. Thanks!

Hi Julie,
The right side (model's right side) of his right eyelash vanishes away in the shadows while his left eyelash is a little thicker than the original.
They are not following the same line, the right eye is larger than it should be. There's also a little area with too much light below his right eyebrow.
Some minor corrections only, the drawing is great!