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Old 11-22-2005, 10:34 PM   #3
Alexandra Tyng Alexandra Tyng is offline
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Hi Chuck,

I agree that you've done a great job of capturing a likeness, and you've also captured more--the sweetness and directness of her personality. The only things you might want to re-check are the left (our right) eye, which is slightly too wide open; the top lid and lashes cover slightly more of the iris. Also the hair seems too solid and all-of-a-piece. I agree that the background could be toned down. It would really help if you could get some better photos. Nice work!

Alex
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