Young man's problems

[Mai Ly]

I have tried to incorporate all suggestions in my current painting. It is now completed and posted under the Unveilings thread.

Leslie, I tried to put the tie in blue, but it seems to get blended in too well with the suit. Then I tried with red, but he never wears red tie, so it did not look like the way I ever remember him, so I left it the same colour, but fixed the knot of the tie, as well as made it a bit darker than the previous post.

Steven, I think I have fixed his left arm, and the shadow side for the face. I hope his jacket looks better now!

Thanks again for all your help. Please let me know what you think of the final piece.

Sincerely,
Mai