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Mary Sparrow · 03-17-2004, 11:18 AM

Thanks Michelle,

I agree about the shadows,and I took that into account when painting this. In person the shadows are not nearly as black. For that matter, I didn't use any black except in his pupils. I still can't figure this camera out. Everything looks a bit off to me no matter how much I fiddle with it in PSP.

Mary Sparrow · 03-17-2004, 05:04 PM

Ok, I took this picture again in better light. I don't know if it helps or not. I do know that I don't like that shadow on the chair in the upper right.

Why are things so obvious on the computer that aren't in person?

Denise Hall · 03-19-2004, 12:35 AM

Mary,

What a great portrait - the colors are luscious and your style is so beautiful! I agree about the shadow coldness but it's a learning experience always!

Denise

Kimberly Dow · 03-19-2004, 01:23 AM

This is lovely Mary! The only thing that bothers me is the pantleg closest to us, where the shadow is. My eye is drawn to that first - maybe just soften the edge?

Lynn Der · 03-19-2004, 08:15 PM

Mary - if this is your first attempt at a full portrait in pastel, you've done a great job. First, the composition and pose are very original - easier said than done, from my experience. The other thing I love is the limited palette you used - it gives a calm, soft feeling to the painting.

There really is nothing that bothers me, except maybe the shadow on the right (on the chair).

The mom should be very happy! Good work!

Lynn Der