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Old 04-18-2005, 10:55 PM   #1
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Aw, come on guys, help me out. Tell me what you see that's off. I know there are lots of places that don't look quite right and really would like feedback.

Please be aware that this is not the greatest photo of the art. The value differences are greater than this, but when I try to darken it in Photoshop, it seems to emphasize the grain of the paper, and it looks bad, so I didn't share the slightly darkened version. Not sure what I can fix here, but I would still like suggestions.....I didn't like having such a light color shirt, so tried to tone it down. Should I make it even darker?
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