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Old 08-14-2005, 10:28 AM   #1
Allan Rahbek Allan Rahbek is offline
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Hi Leslie,

This is a beautiful portrait, nice varied edges, good values and a smashing color scale.
However I think that you could improve the drawing, especially the angles between the planes of the head.

I am sure you will understand if you study the lines I made even though I am not sure if I picked the right reference photo ?

Good work, Allan
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Old 08-14-2005, 11:18 AM   #2
Leslie Bohoss Leslie Bohoss is offline
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Thank you Allan !

Drawing, Basics.. still a trouble.
Upps I was wrong with preference photo. This one was even not posted...
silly me.Sorry, here is the head and the other one was using only for the neck. Anyway, youre still right it is off.

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