Another beautiful one, Clive. These haikus really do make you focus in on a part of the body, and they evoke an emotional response. I think you've done this very successfully. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Haven't weighed in on this series but I've enjoyed each one immensely. It's one of the most original approaches to subject matter and concept that I've seen in quite a while.
Wish I'd thought of it!
Best--TE
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